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authorcorvid <corvid@lavabit.com>2011-07-14 20:48:22 +0000
committercorvid <corvid@lavabit.com>2011-07-14 20:48:22 +0000
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"dillo-2.2.1 is the last of the dillo-2.x series:\n"
"<p>\n"
"The 2.x series\n"
-"were based on FLTK-2.0,\n"
-"which was never released. Unfortunately\n"
-"this fact left dillo out of distro's native packaging systems\n"
-"because of the sensible policy of not including alpha software.\n"
+"was based on FLTK-2.0,\n"
+"which was never released. As distributions have the sensible policy\n"
+"of not including alpha software, this kept dillo from being\n"
+"provided in their native packaging systems.\n"
"<p>\n"
-"The core team decided to switch to the more modern\n"
+"In response, the core team switched to the more modern\n"
"<a href='http://fltk.org/articles.php?L1086'>FLTK-1.3</a> which\n"
-"at this time, already saw its first release. This opens the door\n"
-"for dillo to be back into distros and reach our users in a much\n"
-"simpler way.\n"
+"has already seen its first release. This opens the door\n"
+"for dillo to be included in distros once again and reach our users\n"
+"more easily.\n"
"<p>\n"
-"The development effort shifted to the dillo-3.x branch long ago,\n"
-"and it became the active one (dillo-2.x went unmaintained).\n"
+"The development effort shifted to the dillo-3.x branch long ago, and\n"
+"it became the active one (dillo-2.x received less and less attention).\n"
"<p>\n"
-"The new dillo-3.0 will be available in a few weeks, when it\n"
+"The new dillo-3.0 will be available in a few weeks, after it\n"
"passes the final stages of the release process. It has shown\n"
-"excellent stability and comes with some nice new features too.\n"
+"excellent stability and comes with some nice new features as well.\n"
"<p>\n"
-"Especial thanks go to our long time users and developers for\n"
+"Special thanks go to our longtime users and developers for\n"
"their support and help. We hope to keep surprising them\n"
-"with the new features in the new dillo-3.x series that begins.\n"
+"with the new features in the dillo-3.x series that is to come.\n"
"<p>\n"
" </table>\n"
"</table>\n"