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3 files changed, 27 insertions, 27 deletions

diff --git a/ChangeLog b/ChangeLog
index 528d5ad2..5d9228f1 100644
--- a/ChangeLog
+++ b/ChangeLog
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 Dillo project
 =============================================================================
 
-dillo-2.2.1 [July ??, 2010]
+dillo-2.2.1 [July ??, 2011]
 
 +- Fix fullwindow start.
  - Implemented "View source" as a dpi.
diff --git a/README b/README
index e3940d33..b46c4306 100644
--- a/README
+++ b/README
@@ -4,21 +4,21 @@
 
 dillo-2.2.1 is the last of the dillo-2.x series: 
 
-The  2.x series were based on FLTK-2.0, which was never released.
-Unfortunately  this  fact  left  dillo  out  of  distro's  native
-packaging systems because of the sensible policy of not including
-alpha software. 
+The 2.x series was based on FLTK-2.0, which was never released.
+As distributions have the sensible policy of not including alpha
+software, this kept dillo from being provided in their native
+packaging systems. 
 
-The core team decided to switch to the more modern FLTK-1.3 which
-at  this time, already saw its first release.
+In response, the core team switched to the more modern FLTK-1.3
+which has already seen its first release.
 
-The  development effort shifted to the dillo-3.x branch long ago,
-and it became the active one (dillo-2.x is unmaintained).
-
-The  new  dillo-3.0  will  be  available  in a few weeks, when it
-passes  the  final  stages  of  the release process. It has shown
-excellent stability and comes with some nice new features too.
+The development effort shifted to the dillo-3.x branch long ago,
+and it became the active one (dillo-2.x received less and less
+attention).
 
+The new dillo-3.0 will be available in a few weeks, after it passes
+the final stages of the release process. It has shown excellent
+stability and comes with some nice new features as well.
 
   Here's a list of some well-known problems:
 
diff --git a/src/IO/about.c b/src/IO/about.c
index dabda33d..b0ef529d 100644
--- a/src/IO/about.c
+++ b/src/IO/about.c
@@ -250,27 +250,27 @@ const char *const AboutSplash=
 "dillo-2.2.1 is the last of the dillo-2.x series:\n"
 "<p>\n"
 "The 2.x series\n"
-"were based on FLTK-2.0,\n"
-"which was never released. Unfortunately\n"
-"this fact left dillo out of distro's native packaging systems\n"
-"because of the sensible policy of not including alpha software.\n"
+"was based on FLTK-2.0,\n"
+"which was never released. As distributions have the sensible policy\n"
+"of not including alpha software, this kept dillo from being\n"
+"provided in their native packaging systems.\n"
 "<p>\n"
-"The core team decided to switch to the more modern\n"
+"In response, the core team switched to the more modern\n"
 "<a href='http://fltk.org/articles.php?L1086'>FLTK-1.3</a> which\n"
-"at this time, already saw its first release. This opens the door\n"
-"for dillo to be back into distros and reach our users in a much\n"
-"simpler way.\n"
+"has already seen its first release. This opens the door\n"
+"for dillo to be included in distros once again and reach our users\n"
+"more easily.\n"
 "<p>\n"
-"The development effort shifted to the dillo-3.x branch long ago,\n"
-"and it became the active one (dillo-2.x went unmaintained).\n"
+"The development effort shifted to the dillo-3.x branch long ago, and\n"
+"it became the active one (dillo-2.x received less and less attention).\n"
 "<p>\n"
-"The new dillo-3.0 will be available in a few weeks, when it\n"
+"The new dillo-3.0 will be available in a few weeks, after it\n"
 "passes the final stages of the release process. It has shown\n"
-"excellent stability and comes with some nice new features too.\n"
+"excellent stability and comes with some nice new features as well.\n"
 "<p>\n"
-"Especial thanks go to our long time users and developers for\n"
+"Special thanks go to our longtime users and developers for\n"
 "their support and help. We hope to keep surprising them\n"
-"with the new features in the new dillo-3.x series that begins.\n"
+"with the new features in the dillo-3.x series that is to come.\n"
 "<p>\n"
 "  </table>\n"
 "</table>\n"